Writer Job in Corvallis, Oregon

I have a sifi story first draft that has been to an editor, and she said the story was original and I had a good humor. However she said I needed tension added to some scenes and more descriptive wording. I need to swap a few chapters and add more scenes about how my protagonist gets together with his better half. She also thinks it could have a sequel and that I could have ended it in a different spot. She teaches creative writing at a local collage, so I have respect for her thoughts and suggestions. I also have a publisher that said he liked the premis and wanted a finished version. I think a collaborator would be best for me, if you have read science fiction and like the genre and want a writing credit and percentage of the sales please contact me.